[моё] Madness Madness fanfic/fairy tale
Madness Madness (fairy tale)
#madnessmadness
A cute little town, picturesque mornings. In it, Ova, a green anthropomorphic moth who loves to draw, heard only one thing - you're worse. Vitaminka and Ova were friends, and loved to draw. Vita looked like a human, only gray, with a lush mane of hair and small wings that could not lift her into the air. But she was always better at drawing. Ova draws a picture, and gets criticism and comparisons from Vitaminka. Well, as criticism
- Your arm is too long, and crooked, fix it. And the background is awful, you need another one. I suggest redrawing it, look how beautiful mine is
The green moth did not like this criticism and was withdrawn. She tried to listen to it, but the gray fora (that was the race of Vitaminka) always found something to nitpick and humiliate her over
Ova constantly felt like a shadow and worse than Vitaminka. She began to share her work less and less, and wanted to quit drawing altogether. Vita was offended.
- Well, why are you whining again. You don't tell me anything, what kind of friend are you? - Vita kept telling her
But then she was sent to the village to her grandmother. She was a real pro. The moth expected criticism too, but she was inspired and taught. Over those two weeks, Ova came back confident, open. She learned her mistakes and fixed them. They gave her room to breathe, and Vitaminka finally became worse. Now Ova could criticize her. She came to her friend and looked at her work
- Your art has a lot of anatomical mistakes - the arms are slightly different sizes, you need to erase the fingers a little. The eyes are too far apart, there should be room for a third one between them. Where is the reflection? The light should be reflected from here, because it shines from here. Also, the shine on the hair is too greasy. And here the shadow is so dense, as if it were a dent. You shouldn't press so hard, you need to learn, develop, and also
- JUST SHUT UP
Ova fell silent...
- Okay, I'll never say another word to you. I was going to finish by saying you're no longer my friend. I don't need you, because you're toxic, I'm leaving - said the moth
During her time in the village, the moth gained her dignity. And she was no longer going to put up with this. She left, left...
and then 5 years passed. She is a gallerist now, runs social media. And she notices strange activity from her ex-friend on her account. She had been watching her for 5 years.... what is this? Revenge? Is she plotting something? Ova tensed up. She learned that Vitaminka had become a designer at the studio of the cartoons they watched in childhood. Despite the fact that there was little information in her profile. The moth felt a sting of envy and pride. But also fear. To find out everything, she went to her old house. The door was open, and inside... trash... food wrappers, dust, mold. And drawings - sketches, full-fledged works. And they are very beautiful. Much better than they were then, 5 years ago. In her room, Vitaminka was sitting at a desk and drawing something diligently
- Um, hi? Are you okay?
Vitaminkka didn't react
- Hey - Ova approached, walking around the trash, nearly tripped, touched the homeowner, and then the gray fora turned around and, with a crazy smile, began kissing and groping her
- Is that you? You don't know, ahaha, can you brew rice in a kettle? - she kept saying, laughing hysterically but sincerely- Is that you? You? You came?
- What? so, don't touch me and don't kiss me, you need to ask permission before doing that - Ova pushed her away - how did this happen? Have you gone mad! - Vitaminka's eye twitched. She had uncombed hair, tiny pupils, and that smile.
- Well ahaha, 43832 hours ago in your criticism you said to develop, I, ahaha, googled it and it turns out you need an 8/8/8 schedule, and I started drawing ahaha 16 hours a day! 8 hours work, 8 rest, cool, right? ahaha. I always wanted to draw beautifully, it's so anti-simple without this ahaea, I mean, hard hehe
- No, that's not how it works - sigh - 16 hours is way too much! You also need to walk, exercise, and have other hobbies, and sit on your phone, you won't feel emptiness like this, this won't do at all. And let go of my hand finally! (Vitaminka kept holding her hand even when Ova stepped away)
The moth felt responsible for her
- So, I'll come here tomorrow, help clean the house, and help pull you out of this madness.
Vita's eye twitched. - For now I'm going, but don't do anything to yourself! Here's a jump rope (took the jump rope) - jump if you want, sit on your phone and don't draw, and finish any deadlines if you have them, and sleep.
- Okay :) - Vitaminka hugged her - Bye-bye - and started jumping rope. Literally
*she loves me* - thought the moth
- Not like that, not on the rope itself... and you need to lock the house door. With a lock
- Okay)
*holy crap! What riches* - Ova saw Vitaminka's saved money in the living room - *Alright*, Ova left, Fora closed the door.
The next day they cleaned the house. It was long, but they managed. In the evening they sat, drank tea, and discussed Vita's plan
- How did you get a job with all this madness? - said the moth, and Vitaminka's eye twitched
- I somehow won a contest ahaha from that Reby studio, probably a mistake, but I googled what I should do at the interview hehe. It said something about cleanliness, I put in the background in the program, cool, right?
- So, I wouldn't say that's a mistake... so, how much time do you spend on work, and what are your deadlines?
- Actually one day
- In hours
- in hour hands ahaha
- Sigh, how many hours do you spend on work?
- 7 or 8, and my deadline is a week, ahah
- So you'll work 3 hours a day. Then half an hour of exercise, to start with, maybe more later, then an hour of drawing, and the rest of the time is walks and trying something new
- But an hour is too little for someone who's just learning
- I'd say you've already learned. You're a pro, and you don't have to draw all your life
Vita opened her eyes wide, looked at Ova with her tiny pupils, the smile disappeared, but she said nothing.
After that, they started talking and walking a lot. "Everything must be resolved peacefully, without aggression," Ova taught. She rehabilitated her into society.
Vita was talkative, they communicated a lot. The gray one still remembered that her friend loved dolphins... and Fora often violated the moth's personal space with her affection and touchiness. The moth wanted to leave, because she saw Fora's progress. But she kept putting it off, making excuses. Something held her there. And then Ova got a local commission - a painting of their city from above. But the only tall building was abandoned. Ova's wings were sick, but she was sure. She put her phone on a power bank and climbed onto the roof of that building to take a photo; after taking the picture, the hatch back wouldn't open, no matter what the green one did. In fear, she took out her phone and wrote to Vita. She couldn't call emergency services because of some glitch. Because of the same glitch, the phone didn't charge at all, and after sending the message to her friend, it shut off
The moth was horrified by all this and didn't know what Fora would do. Ova was in panic, she breathed deeply, her eyes darted around; because of her wing illness she couldn't fly temporarily. "I climbed there tons of times, how did this happen?" Vitaminka was already at the building. She took off on her tiny wings, but she wouldn't have had the strength to make it there so easily, so she clung to the window grate, then to the balcony, then to the sill, and that was how she got onto the roof. And not empty-handed - with a rope. It was also dangerous to fly away with Ova's weight, so... Vita wrapped the rope around her friend, and tied the other end to the rusty manhole cover. She sat on the rope, taking the weight in the form of a brick, bracing her feet against the roof, and slowly lowered her, rising a little at times, and later the moth gave a signal sound that she had come down, and then Fora flew down after her. Ova hugged her and kissed her on the lips - thank you so much! But you can't fly! Your wings are small
- I've learned over those 5 years, you just need to move them faster, well, uh, flap them. Hehe. I wasn't gliding, well, flying, in front of you, because I didn't want to offend you with your illness hehe. Screw you and your illness. And to get onto the roof I flew up, clinging to windows and grates
- Oh my God, thank you! You saved me! I... you know, let's date!
Vitaminka was surprised by this again - seriously? - she removed the smile, her pupils narrowed
- Yes. And... I taught you how to behave, pulled you out of madness, taught you housework, I think therapy is over. But I'm staying
Vita's pupils began to dilate
They smiled, Vita had the happiest sparkle in her eyes, Vitaminka hugged her tightly, and they went home. The gray fora kept showering the moth with her touchiness
They had a great relationship. But Vita was very touchy, which annoyed Ova. Ova loved her, restrained her anger, but got angrier and angrier. She thought it was a trifle, years had passed. "please, leave me alone" - thought the moth. "enough, God, how clingy you are" - thought she
- Listen, you've pissed me off! I'm already in a bad mood because of an insane client, and now you too! I want to be alone!
Vita darkened - you yourself said that aggression isn't needed to solve problems, well, I mean, all problems need to be solved without aggression... you know, I wanted to calm you down. I'll give you time - Vitaminka left and quietly cried in her room. Ova thought. "and it's true, but you have to think. Well, no, well, that was obvious... or not? Eh.... should I apologize now? Maybe... before she kills her own psyche." Soon she went to her girlfriend - You know, you're right. I shouldn't have lashed out, I just need personal space sometimes. I never said this all annoys me, sorry. Sigh, we need to resolve everything calmly, I'll say what's wrong, and when I need to be alone
Vita smiled - I want to show you something - Fora took a ring from the shelf. It was in the shape of a dolphin, because Ova loves fish
- I want to marry you, or, well, be your wife
- What? Are you serious? Is this real?
- Yes
- But where did you get it?
- I printed it on a 3D printer)
- Wow... and... how did you guess the size?
- I made you a little model as a gift hehe with your proportions, remember? I enlarged it to your hehe height, modeled a ring around the finger, and there, printed it
- Oh my God, I'm happy, you're the best, I agree! - they hugged
And so the two of them got married. They signed the papers, and went to the beach, where they had a good time. And everything was fine for them, but Vita remained a little crazy)
Epilogue :
Ova found herself a friend. Zheto. He is a ginger anthropomorphic cat. After that, Vita became very nervous, she didn't lash out, but she worried, making sudden movements, her eye twitching when the moth and the cat talked.
Ova : is everything okay?
Vita : hehe, yes
Ova : no, tell me
Vita : sigh, I'm jealous, because I got used to being the center of your universe, sorry, it's bad and selfish, but I'm afraid I'll disappear from your memory, well, be forgotten
Ova : hehe, need I remind you that I'm a lesbian? The center of my universe is me and you, and it will always be that way. Yes, it's selfish and bad, but I'd be jealous too at first. Hehe, I think I know. You can talk to him. I'm sure you'll be friends too. *kiss on the lips*
Vitaminka blushed - oh, ahaha thanks)
Vita went to Zheto
*damn, how do I start a conversation? God, I'm scared* - uh, can you tell me the time?
Zheto - you have a phone right here
Vita *embarrassed* : awkward, I just wanted to get to know you better, well, have some kind of dialogue with you, sorry!
Zheto - okay, what did you want to talk about?
Vita - To learn more about you... if you don't mind talking with me, of course
Zheto - I don't mind)
after that they became friends too, and Vitaminka calmed down a lot after that. And yes, no one cheated on anyone, left anyone, or pushed anyone into the background
#madnessmadness
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A cute little town, picturesque mornings. In it, Ova, a green anthropomorphic moth who loves to draw, heard only one thing - you're worse. Vitaminka and Ova were friends, and loved to draw. Vita looked like a human, only gray, with a lush mane of hair and small wings that could not lift her into the air. But she was always better at drawing. Ova draws a picture, and gets criticism and comparisons from Vitaminka. Well, as criticism
- Your arm is too long, and crooked, fix it. And the background is awful, you need another one. I suggest redrawing it, look how beautiful mine is
The green moth did not like this criticism and was withdrawn. She tried to listen to it, but the gray fora (that was the race of Vitaminka) always found something to nitpick and humiliate her over
Ova constantly felt like a shadow and worse than Vitaminka. She began to share her work less and less, and wanted to quit drawing altogether. Vita was offended.
- Well, why are you whining again. You don't tell me anything, what kind of friend are you? - Vita kept telling her
But then she was sent to the village to her grandmother. She was a real pro. The moth expected criticism too, but she was inspired and taught. Over those two weeks, Ova came back confident, open. She learned her mistakes and fixed them. They gave her room to breathe, and Vitaminka finally became worse. Now Ova could criticize her. She came to her friend and looked at her work
- Your art has a lot of anatomical mistakes - the arms are slightly different sizes, you need to erase the fingers a little. The eyes are too far apart, there should be room for a third one between them. Where is the reflection? The light should be reflected from here, because it shines from here. Also, the shine on the hair is too greasy. And here the shadow is so dense, as if it were a dent. You shouldn't press so hard, you need to learn, develop, and also
- JUST SHUT UP
Ova fell silent...
- Okay, I'll never say another word to you. I was going to finish by saying you're no longer my friend. I don't need you, because you're toxic, I'm leaving - said the moth
During her time in the village, the moth gained her dignity. And she was no longer going to put up with this. She left, left...
and then 5 years passed. She is a gallerist now, runs social media. And she notices strange activity from her ex-friend on her account. She had been watching her for 5 years.... what is this? Revenge? Is she plotting something? Ova tensed up. She learned that Vitaminka had become a designer at the studio of the cartoons they watched in childhood. Despite the fact that there was little information in her profile. The moth felt a sting of envy and pride. But also fear. To find out everything, she went to her old house. The door was open, and inside... trash... food wrappers, dust, mold. And drawings - sketches, full-fledged works. And they are very beautiful. Much better than they were then, 5 years ago. In her room, Vitaminka was sitting at a desk and drawing something diligently
- Um, hi? Are you okay?
Vitaminkka didn't react
- Hey - Ova approached, walking around the trash, nearly tripped, touched the homeowner, and then the gray fora turned around and, with a crazy smile, began kissing and groping her
- Is that you? You don't know, ahaha, can you brew rice in a kettle? - she kept saying, laughing hysterically but sincerely- Is that you? You? You came?
- What? so, don't touch me and don't kiss me, you need to ask permission before doing that - Ova pushed her away - how did this happen? Have you gone mad! - Vitaminka's eye twitched. She had uncombed hair, tiny pupils, and that smile.
- Well ahaha, 43832 hours ago in your criticism you said to develop, I, ahaha, googled it and it turns out you need an 8/8/8 schedule, and I started drawing ahaha 16 hours a day! 8 hours work, 8 rest, cool, right? ahaha. I always wanted to draw beautifully, it's so anti-simple without this ahaea, I mean, hard hehe
- No, that's not how it works - sigh - 16 hours is way too much! You also need to walk, exercise, and have other hobbies, and sit on your phone, you won't feel emptiness like this, this won't do at all. And let go of my hand finally! (Vitaminka kept holding her hand even when Ova stepped away)
The moth felt responsible for her
- So, I'll come here tomorrow, help clean the house, and help pull you out of this madness.
Vita's eye twitched. - For now I'm going, but don't do anything to yourself! Here's a jump rope (took the jump rope) - jump if you want, sit on your phone and don't draw, and finish any deadlines if you have them, and sleep.
- Okay :) - Vitaminka hugged her - Bye-bye - and started jumping rope. Literally
*she loves me* - thought the moth
- Not like that, not on the rope itself... and you need to lock the house door. With a lock
- Okay)
*holy crap! What riches* - Ova saw Vitaminka's saved money in the living room - *Alright*, Ova left, Fora closed the door.
The next day they cleaned the house. It was long, but they managed. In the evening they sat, drank tea, and discussed Vita's plan
- How did you get a job with all this madness? - said the moth, and Vitaminka's eye twitched
- I somehow won a contest ahaha from that Reby studio, probably a mistake, but I googled what I should do at the interview hehe. It said something about cleanliness, I put in the background in the program, cool, right?
- So, I wouldn't say that's a mistake... so, how much time do you spend on work, and what are your deadlines?
- Actually one day
- In hours
- in hour hands ahaha
- Sigh, how many hours do you spend on work?
- 7 or 8, and my deadline is a week, ahah
- So you'll work 3 hours a day. Then half an hour of exercise, to start with, maybe more later, then an hour of drawing, and the rest of the time is walks and trying something new
- But an hour is too little for someone who's just learning
- I'd say you've already learned. You're a pro, and you don't have to draw all your life
Vita opened her eyes wide, looked at Ova with her tiny pupils, the smile disappeared, but she said nothing.
After that, they started talking and walking a lot. "Everything must be resolved peacefully, without aggression," Ova taught. She rehabilitated her into society.
Vita was talkative, they communicated a lot. The gray one still remembered that her friend loved dolphins... and Fora often violated the moth's personal space with her affection and touchiness. The moth wanted to leave, because she saw Fora's progress. But she kept putting it off, making excuses. Something held her there. And then Ova got a local commission - a painting of their city from above. But the only tall building was abandoned. Ova's wings were sick, but she was sure. She put her phone on a power bank and climbed onto the roof of that building to take a photo; after taking the picture, the hatch back wouldn't open, no matter what the green one did. In fear, she took out her phone and wrote to Vita. She couldn't call emergency services because of some glitch. Because of the same glitch, the phone didn't charge at all, and after sending the message to her friend, it shut off
The moth was horrified by all this and didn't know what Fora would do. Ova was in panic, she breathed deeply, her eyes darted around; because of her wing illness she couldn't fly temporarily. "I climbed there tons of times, how did this happen?" Vitaminka was already at the building. She took off on her tiny wings, but she wouldn't have had the strength to make it there so easily, so she clung to the window grate, then to the balcony, then to the sill, and that was how she got onto the roof. And not empty-handed - with a rope. It was also dangerous to fly away with Ova's weight, so... Vita wrapped the rope around her friend, and tied the other end to the rusty manhole cover. She sat on the rope, taking the weight in the form of a brick, bracing her feet against the roof, and slowly lowered her, rising a little at times, and later the moth gave a signal sound that she had come down, and then Fora flew down after her. Ova hugged her and kissed her on the lips - thank you so much! But you can't fly! Your wings are small
- I've learned over those 5 years, you just need to move them faster, well, uh, flap them. Hehe. I wasn't gliding, well, flying, in front of you, because I didn't want to offend you with your illness hehe. Screw you and your illness. And to get onto the roof I flew up, clinging to windows and grates
- Oh my God, thank you! You saved me! I... you know, let's date!
Vitaminka was surprised by this again - seriously? - she removed the smile, her pupils narrowed
- Yes. And... I taught you how to behave, pulled you out of madness, taught you housework, I think therapy is over. But I'm staying
Vita's pupils began to dilate
They smiled, Vita had the happiest sparkle in her eyes, Vitaminka hugged her tightly, and they went home. The gray fora kept showering the moth with her touchiness
They had a great relationship. But Vita was very touchy, which annoyed Ova. Ova loved her, restrained her anger, but got angrier and angrier. She thought it was a trifle, years had passed. "please, leave me alone" - thought the moth. "enough, God, how clingy you are" - thought she
- Listen, you've pissed me off! I'm already in a bad mood because of an insane client, and now you too! I want to be alone!
Vita darkened - you yourself said that aggression isn't needed to solve problems, well, I mean, all problems need to be solved without aggression... you know, I wanted to calm you down. I'll give you time - Vitaminka left and quietly cried in her room. Ova thought. "and it's true, but you have to think. Well, no, well, that was obvious... or not? Eh.... should I apologize now? Maybe... before she kills her own psyche." Soon she went to her girlfriend - You know, you're right. I shouldn't have lashed out, I just need personal space sometimes. I never said this all annoys me, sorry. Sigh, we need to resolve everything calmly, I'll say what's wrong, and when I need to be alone
Vita smiled - I want to show you something - Fora took a ring from the shelf. It was in the shape of a dolphin, because Ova loves fish
- I want to marry you, or, well, be your wife
- What? Are you serious? Is this real?
- Yes
- But where did you get it?
- I printed it on a 3D printer)
- Wow... and... how did you guess the size?
- I made you a little model as a gift hehe with your proportions, remember? I enlarged it to your hehe height, modeled a ring around the finger, and there, printed it
- Oh my God, I'm happy, you're the best, I agree! - they hugged
And so the two of them got married. They signed the papers, and went to the beach, where they had a good time. And everything was fine for them, but Vita remained a little crazy)
Epilogue :
Ova found herself a friend. Zheto. He is a ginger anthropomorphic cat. After that, Vita became very nervous, she didn't lash out, but she worried, making sudden movements, her eye twitching when the moth and the cat talked.
Ova : is everything okay?
Vita : hehe, yes
Ova : no, tell me
Vita : sigh, I'm jealous, because I got used to being the center of your universe, sorry, it's bad and selfish, but I'm afraid I'll disappear from your memory, well, be forgotten
Ova : hehe, need I remind you that I'm a lesbian? The center of my universe is me and you, and it will always be that way. Yes, it's selfish and bad, but I'd be jealous too at first. Hehe, I think I know. You can talk to him. I'm sure you'll be friends too. *kiss on the lips*
Vitaminka blushed - oh, ahaha thanks)
Vita went to Zheto
*damn, how do I start a conversation? God, I'm scared* - uh, can you tell me the time?
Zheto - you have a phone right here
Vita *embarrassed* : awkward, I just wanted to get to know you better, well, have some kind of dialogue with you, sorry!
Zheto - okay, what did you want to talk about?
Vita - To learn more about you... if you don't mind talking with me, of course
Zheto - I don't mind)
after that they became friends too, and Vitaminka calmed down a lot after that. And yes, no one cheated on anyone, left anyone, or pushed anyone into the background
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